Thursday, January 29, 2009

lost in lust

= = =
caress, jagged, ruthless
(3WW #CXXII)
= = =



sweet caress of lover's touch
leaves my breathing
jagged
as burning skin
tingles
under his ruthless
scrutiny

6 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Nice words. A marvellous human moment.

ThomG said...

Wow, a lot of power and raw emotion in such a little package. Powerful.

floreta said...

two very opposite emotions in one. dangerous chemistry!

Fledgling Poet said...

Yes, this was potent...beautifully done!

Jane Doe said...

Wonderful, I loved this one! A great take on the prompt. Short, but strong and powerful.

pjd said...

Willow, willow... now I need a stiff drink.